- The sixth bullet should be "Advocate for Policy" or something similar. All of the other bullets use an action verb, and this should as well so that we maintain parallel construction.
- The statement "take part in various symposia" is confusing. Our members are used to attending symposia and listening to technical presentations. If that's what you're referring to, then you should considering wording as such. But I think you mean the special deliberative events that are being created. in that case, you should define better what is meant here so folks reading the message understand that this is something different.
This looks very good to me. Thanks for writing it! I would suggest that the first reference to an https site be made into an active hyperlink.
I've tried making words out of the 7 subthemes (agipper?) but haven't been successful...anyone have suggestions?